On an isolated lake in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan there is a small two-room log cabin, which rests in a clearing adjacent to hundreds of magnificent pine trees. It has a steep A- frame roof and green shutters on the windows. The side of the cabin facing the lake is all glass with double glass doors opening to a large redwood deck overlooking the beautiful lake.
I could step outside and breathe in the brisk morning air and know I’m in Gods country. I could build a nice fire in the fire pit and then I could grab a fishing rod and walk down to the water’s edge and catch some fish for breakfast which would be cooked over an open flame while a pot of strong coffee sits perking, nestled in the red hot coals.
I could paint the beautiful surrounding scenery and the numerous wildlife frolicking in the area. Or I could just paint the face of the one I love, which is always in the forefront of my mind. I could spend countless hours in solitude, writing, with only an occasional interruption by a passing squirrel gathering acorns. There are no telephone lines or cable lines so I would be isolated from the busy world I live in now except for a weekly sojourn into the small town many miles away for supplies.
For lunch I could eat homemade jerky or smoked fish and fresh picked black berries from the berry patch off the trail near the cabin. For a midday snack I could eat the wintergreen berries found near the woods as I stroll along on my daily walk. They taste just like wintergreen gum. After my walk I would then grab my fishing rod and fish for my dinner.
I could spend my evening sitting by an open campfire strumming my guitar and singing songs. There would be no one there to criticize my singing so I could just let it all out. I could be Elvis Presley or Tom Jones or who ever I want to be. There would be no one listening except the animals.
When I became sleepy I could either sleep by the campfire under the clear starry night sky or sleep in the cabin until the next daylight comes. I will then walk outside and breathe in the cool brisk air.
This is where I want to live. This is where I want to die.
Author notes
This is a revision of an older write
A contest entry
- Tell Me Contest by Riftkin.
700 points, ended January 5, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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beautiful and thankyou for entering. I like the way you described youre heaven!
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Beautiful!!!! Thanks for entering!!!
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Wow! I think you did a great job!! The place sounds very beautiful. You described it very well. Good Luck in the contest!!! Keep writing, I look forward to reading more from you!!!
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Such a wonderful place this seems.
Thank you very much for entering my contest.
Riftkin

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Beautiful place to be
Well done

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This does indeed sound like Heaven, Richard
Such a beautiful and inspiring place in which to live and die.
I hope your wish is reality for you. I think there are not many people who will allow themselves to live that dream, though. We let too many things get in the way.
A lovely and meaningful write
love and
Dee


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