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Burdens

My burden was to share yours
But that was yours halved
So I didn't mind.

We talked,
We laughed,
I sighed, near cried
The news reached my ears

That you'd near died
The love I felt
Redoubled
I knew you were in trouble

Now I'm learning
The fire's burning
Moving on,
We are still one.

This stony road was not of my making
But I walk on still
The same path I am taking.

In closing, I say no more than this.
God bless, sweet Chris.

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Option Three::
No one is useless in the world who lightens the burden of it for anyone else. --Charles Dickens.


Broken && Bruised.

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  • my.stars.dont.shine
    November 24, 2008

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    First off; You are the first one who has followed the rules completely, thanks!

    I like what you have done withe prompt. Its beautifully written. Thanks for entering and good luck!