Yearning no longer, I have found her
Anti-boredom, laughing a lot
New kisses dressed up in lace
Immaculate moments of red burning hot
Respect, a must in every turn
Ambiguity never a friend
Intriguing the strength of her step
Marching relentless towards our nest
Yes before God, I want to respond
Our bond fusing into one
Under our feet, deep roots expect
Relishing on the clock
Savoring each other in our love quest
Author notes
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A contest entry
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900 points, ended November 30, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I am glad you took the time to list all the things you are looking for in a partner.
To me the perfect partner would be one that is caring and understanding.
Riftkin
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thanks
thanks for the opportunity, the inspiration and the mention.
love is grand!
~marcus
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dad u always use the term nest. its different, but it implies aolt, i like it.
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hi baby
yeah, nest... it means different things depending on the context. in this case, it means home. a safe haven. what we all want. a normal, cozy home...
i love u...
~dad
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This is one that says so much, I also could feel the passionate emotions....Well done my talented poetic friend.........
novy
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thanks
thaks novy. can u tell im in love?
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