Angel
atop the tree
reflects the glow of lights
as snow falls like feathers outside.
Carolers sing beneath a lone bright star
in front of a garland draped door,
and the smallest singer
looks so like an
angel.
Author notes
http://worshipinthecity.stlouisblogs.org/archives/images/Caroling.jpg
In a list
A contest entry
- Christmas Pre-writes by Judith Chandler.
700 points, ended December 22, 2008, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Good-bye Contest I'm Leaving AP (just added points) by BeautifullyBroken42.
576 points, ended January 12, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Not much as seen now a days, but love the tiny tim charoling, but it would be better if it would snow for us around that time. It waits for January...lol, a delightful, lovely vision. Beautiful. Blessings.
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amazing
The layout is engaging,the wording rich and poignant,a truly delightful poem,which I am proud to have been given the pleasure to read. -
This is so beautiful! I love the imagry here! Good luck
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This is gorgeous! well done
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I love the imagery. Nice use of the rictameter and you describe the Christmas caroling in such a simple, concise way.
Thank you for entering my contest. -
Aww.
That was really lovely.
Good write.
Well done and good luck in the contests. -
Aw those moments ..
The voices choral.. bringing Christmas to my door
Best wishes to you Sis
Julie your pet
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That is good
This is a good poem. You followed the rules and the structure of the form. Thank you for coming to my contest. Haley27
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