I am ruin and destruction,
hidden behind a friendly smile.
A contest entry
- Describe yourself once more in 10 words { The best of 4 rounds } by Noir mariposa...x.
1200 points, ended November 26, 2008, 41 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
When hope seems forever lost, how can it ever be recaptured?
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When ruins are found they tell their own story and yours is one that all should hear, and be amazed, because though you may be "ruined" you are still strong and willing to move on....Your perfection to me and many others I'm sure.
Angel
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*frowns slightly*
"I am ruin and destruction,
hidden behind a friendly smile."
Well this sorta sounds like me
(unfortunately)
What a sad write, I relate to it well.
Thank you for your entry
I wish you luck
Claire x -
There is light in ruin for when things fall, they get rebuilt again, stronger and better. But keep the smile C
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nice. The whole mask thing eh. ye me to...anyhow good luck in the contest
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Very nice. Good luck in the contest and happy trails.
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look deep within, there is always hope. It will shine again.
Juls
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