What do you say about kisses when our hearts pound?
can you say that they can see each other around?
what makes them go so fast and filled with emotions?
can you say they understand each others notions?
we know it and you know it and its just so real,
you see it and i see it that its magic that we feel,
then when am on the phone you are on it too,
when am hurting you understand what am going through,
then why do you want to cry when you see me cry?
for every thing that i go through you want to know why,
and want to see me every time that am away,
so i just want to know every time if you are okay,
this is just more than nature and stars shining above,
its the deepest ocean that is called real love,
so i would love you like nothing else in this world,
and make you see that what we have is made of gold,
its so special and the other side of the story you have never been told,
its our nature to see diamonds in our eyes when we hold.
Author notes
please, read this while thinking deply, dont just read it for the sake of reading it, also feel it!you will understand.
A contest entry
- Suzyque needs to know...Is Love Alive....Show me...Past Present, Future by SuZyCuE.
900 points, ended December 11, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
feel the thing that i feel?
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Thanks for entering, I like your poem, I was just wondering maybe you could use the otherside of the story you spoke of to make the real love shine. Kind of a contrast to what you have written. also the title kind of sounds like a death sentence lol you have too many nice things in here for such a title,
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thankz
hey, gud, you are a quick one you know.
its nice, i appreciate it.
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its what you need to know
really,seriously, and sweetly.
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