Come to me under cover of night
Bring with you my favorite delight
Your lips, your tongue, your shaft of love
Give me all that I dream of
Make my fantasy come true
Tease me, make me beg for you
I offer myself to your burning desire
Make the flames dance ever higher
I've wanted this for a long time
For the moment, be all mine
My lust for you is easily shown
Yessss..Touch me there and hear me moan
See me tremble with delight
Take your time, we have all night
Now its time to consumate
Hurry now I cannot wait
Now gaze deep into my eyes
As our psyches harmonize
A glimpse of heaven is what I see
Take me now..set us both free
A contest entry
- HOT, SENSUAL, EROTIC! by My Souls Reflection.
700 points, ended December 10, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well, you pulled out all the stops, as they say with this one. Nothing left out from the lover of your dreams. I could feel the heat as i read this. Wow, hot stuff, for sure.
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HOT!!
The anticipation of finally fulfilling the fantasy...consummating the love...is the most wonderful feeling. That first time together is irretrievable and so special. A lot of impatient desire here, a lot of heat in those flames.
Thank you for your fantastic entry!
Annie
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Wow! you really have a way with words! All the best in the contest!
Becks
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surprising even more
something about the flames!, now a pattern is really coming.the delight, the gaze in the eyes. its all fitting in one place. some one you desire passionately is what you are trying to paint and the picture just comes out perfect, really perfect, something more about your style..............
ok it all makes a beautiful poem but there is something more that am trying to confirm............................
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Hot Hot Hot!!! I love the rhyme... and leads the way to climax! sensual....
Becca
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HOT!!!
Your sensual pieces seem to flow around on another...that missing lover. I like that. I've read a great deal of your "adult" pieces, and they seem to intertwine like a tapestry. Fantastic write. Mandie
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Very good write here good luck in the contest.
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Beautiful and sensually written!
Lovely thought for this contest my friend.
I hope that you do well with it here!
Jeremy0826
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