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Deceit

You simply left me after I gave you my best
I can't believe what you did...
I gave you all of me...nothing less...

Now darkness surrounds me and I can't figure this out...
Why'd you promise me forever...
If in the back of your mind you had doubt?...

You left me here standing ...insecurity has now become my friend...
You left me broken...alone...
With a heart left to mend...

I sit here in the night; whispering to darkness my deepest fears...
My soul aches...forever lost...
As my eyes bleed red from tears...

You said I was beautiful...yet beauty was not only seen in my face...
I accepted your words...
But now I'm only an angel... an angel who has fallen from grace

You tried to give me life, my everything you said you wanted to be...
You tried to be my energy...
But you killed me...for you were only my extacy...

Its like you never wanted this...its true what they say, "love is blind"....and in it all, I still had trust...
I thought you wanted ME..but behind your eyes...
Was only a stare of pure lust...

A look into the sky reveals the most beautiful white birds...
I've become lost...and forgotten..
Your words...the most beautiful lies I've ever heard...

So here I sit...in the dark..listening to the wind as its howls become the most hurtful song...
I sit broken......
With my arms wrapped around myself....I'm so alone....

Author notes

sometimes things aren't always what they seem...this happen to me a while ago....but I guess I never fully got over it.... hope you enjoyed I kinda wrote it as though I was the girl in this picture....

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  • BleedingBlackTears
    December 3, 2008
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    wonderful


  • Yahiko
    November 24, 2008

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    awwww I know this feeling in some ways...I have never had a relationship, but I thought someone had mutual feelings for me, but then I found out I was wrong...three times. But sometimes you will never get over, it will be a part of you forever. However, sometimes it can be used as a learning experience, but hey what do I know about life? Good write, and thanks for listening to my rant


  • allygirl87
    November 24, 2008

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    awee similar happened to me.... and i didnt think i would get over it... but then i met wes