We both have our problems
that we share with each other,
we work through it together
and comfort one another.
We enjoy each others presence,
together we have grown,
we share our life spiritually
trust between us has been shown.
You are my one true love
and forever you will be,
in the temple we were wed
for now and all eternity.
We were meant to be as one,
as a couple we are true,
we share our relationship with god
and we respect each other too.
If we live our life righteously
and face our trials and strife,
in the celestial kingdom
together we'll find eternal life.
When we pass away
it helps us say goodbye,
we know we'll meet in heaven
to be with god on high.
A contest entry
- Spirituality Challenge by dustytiger.
900 points, ended November 29, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - SOULMATES what do they mean to YOU? by ennovy.
900 points, ended May 26, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wonderful imagery showing your true love and devotion to one another. Loved the flawless rhyme. Thanks for entering, and good luck in our contest.
Novy & Brazos
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Beautiful smooth rhyming...the read flowed like warm honey.....sweet account of your soulmate...Thank you for entering our contest...novy & brazos
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this is beautiful, it reminds me of the song "october" by evanescence, as well as of my grandparents, it's a great write, thank you for the entry
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