Each day passing is another treasure in your pockets
And this day, especially, is a gift to all around you
For within your treasured memories you have so many
But today is when we hold you in ours
For it is on this day, your birthday,
We were blessed with your presence
So we gather the candles and presents and poems
Camera's set ready to capture this moment
As you both blow out the flames, releasing wishes
And in this sweet melody you hear,
May you always hold it in your heart's smile
It's your birthday, to you two
Your special qualities, there aren't just a few
You have the smiles that grace the house
Even bringing happiness to that really scared mouse
Running through the rooms with screams of joy
Playing with your new favorite found toys
Just remember what had been today
All your dreams, hopes, and things you pray
For it was nothing less than your 11th Birthday
Happy Birthday Georgia and Malcolm
May God bless you with many more wonderful years
Author notes
Georgia and Malcolm ~ Happy 11th B-day
A contest entry
- My First Contest...I want some Birthday poems! by My Souls Reflection.
1200 points, ended December 9, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think? And if you dont like it, go away... need to correct a typo? message me, please leave it out of comments
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I was looking for special poems and you certainly delivered...this is amazing! I can see that Georgia loved it too and I know without doubt that Malcolm will as well.
Thank you so much!
Annie
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Birthdays are indeed very special for everyone. It's great for them to celebrate coming to this world, but also wonderful for us to celebrate the gift of having them with us. I am glad you enjoyed it, I do hope Malcolm likes it as well. Take care
Jason
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Thank you so much !! I know, i am being a bit naughty. I am commenting before my birthday!
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It's ok, lol. Just glad you liked it
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This is really sweet Georgia is as precious as can be and I am sure that her brother is swell thanks for sharing good luck in the contest be well
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happy bday!lol..nice job.. great flow.. amazing
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