SWhe writes without remorse
Pain and hate flowing
with the scribbles of the pen
A waterfall of full of emotion
the voices of her past scream
with violent rage
A platform where she stands
she places a necklace around
her neck
she steps off
without remorse
and enters to
internal darkness
What did you think
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oh cool. very dark. my favorite kind! =) reminds me a little of the way i write. yay!
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Sounds like something, something I would just say withou realizing it. I'm full of darkness...the goths in my town can't resist me, yet they hold their peace.
This is a good write. If the dark infernal world is what you aim for, you're there.
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nice
wow, this poem is really good, keeping writting, ur good -
i think this poem is really good keep writing......*wall
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wow..very powerful..i got a question..what was your inspiration for this?
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A friend killed her self bc her boy friend call her fat she was 5 6 133
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this is really good. it shows alot of emotion without being to overbearing...
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Thank you
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