She cries late at night
wondering how it all got so complicated...
it started out perfect
Here she lies on the floor
slowly fades into death's arms
how did it end up like this
he was her everything
they had a love so strong
if only a happily ever after was possible
now as she swallows the last pill
and with her last breath she say "Goodbye, i've loved you all along"
across town he whispers into the air "we will be together, i promise"
A contest entry
- Unrequited love by Smokebox.
550 points, ended December 8, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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Very sad. Without love you can feel like all is lost and death is the only alternative. God knows I've felt like that. Great write, good luck, and thanks for entering!
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very deep...great read...shows true emotion
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