Two little stars that bright my nights,
Two little tears full of truth.
My life you have made into hapinnes and non regrets.
Today in you 11th birthday I want you to know,
that the rhymes on my poems come from you.
Two little eyes who show me where my life goes,
Two little felows that I adore.
My heart I give to you.
My dreams I want to share with you,
and hope the best to both of you.
A contest entry
- My First Contest...I want some Birthday poems! by My Souls Reflection.
1200 points, ended December 9, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is so special...I love it! I see that Georgia does too.
Thank you so much!
Annie
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i forgot that i did
dont get angry at me for leaving too many comments will you?? -
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Hahaha dont worry thanks for ur comments
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Whoops, i forgot to leave clappies!
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Thankyou soo much for your warm birthday wish!!
I cant leave any criticism! Its too good!!!
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This is really sweet! I love the way that you wrote this. Well done and good luck to you in this contest!
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Thanks for ur comments
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