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Everything

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He became my freedom
holding tenderly my crystal heart.
Finding each piece
someone else shattered
healing each broken part.


Love's gift is the mending
salvation, understanding.
A stroke of emotions,
vivid passion unfolding
without ever being demanding.


Now I soar heavens skies
as rains of life turned
to angelic tears.
He washed away my fears.


Happiness pure, precious
grows strong with desires.
He's my EVERYTHING until
my old soul expires.

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I found freedom, love, understanding,salvations, and no fear....


He is my EVERYTHING

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  • Mad Pastor Grovell
    March 30

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    Very nice writing. May God bless you and keep you from all horrid sin. I shall pray for you and all young people to be spared from sin.


  • Rheea gold member
    March 6
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    You beautiful writer how you take us there and back. so touching this is and I know he loves it.


  • Titus gold member
    March 3
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    unconditional love in the highest maxim, wow, what a launch. Nice words.


  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    February 13

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    Awww I love this!

    Especially the ending.... something about it is so... gentle, mature, perfectly stated.

    Definitely an awesome write! Thanks for sharing!


  • tomisb
    January 26

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    I doubt your "old soul" will ever expire. This is a beautiful hymn to the gifts of real love. You capture the blessing held when a true mate is found wonderfully.
    Love, Tom B.


  • Beret55 silver member
    December 28, 2008
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    That was very well writen. Sounds like your very happy. Thats great. Loved the poem.


  • PastelMoons gold member
    December 27, 2008

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    "vivid passion unfolding
    without ever being demanding"
    Such poignant beauty.
    I get a sense of true love--
    the way love was intended to be
    from this amazing piece.
    It's always a pleasure
    I have missed reading you
    ~Pastel


  • theburninglegend silver member
    December 13, 2008

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    Congrats

    first and foremost, congrats on the trophy, and secondly what an amazing write. It's full off passion and love and I can see the companionship imagery painted in so many words. You have shown that no matter what happens to your heart, there is always one person who will heal and patch up the holes. Many things happened for reasons, and people enter our lives for other, and this piece explained it well. Great Job


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 9, 2008
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    amazingly sweet

    So full of romantic phrasing and lovely thoughts and great imagery..excellent work.


  • Mykeee
    December 9, 2008

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    This was very good mom. The emotional scars from another, being placed back together by another. But seemingly grateful for the experience. Congrats on the Bronze as well.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 30, 2008

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    Wow, you did it up just fine and lovely...congrats on the trophy


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    I am glad you took the time to list all the things you are looking for in a partner.
    To me the perfect partner would be one that is caring and understanding.

    Riftkin


  • Abson
    November 24, 2008

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    AMAZING

    This is an amazing piece of romantic poem that explains the ABC of true love.True love is not demanding and neither relenting,"it drips like the fountain "constantly refreshing the soul.I admire the clarity of the wording and the uniqueness of the imageries here.GREAT WRITE!!!


  • Katie Lazette
    November 24, 2008

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    Another beautiful poem novy. The words just seem to pour from you heart. Good luck in the contest.


  • Brazos silver member
    November 24, 2008

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    A wonderfully pumped fountain of love here my love. You made an eloquent point about the understanding of love; obediance truly has nothing to do with love. The one you love the most should strive to be your best friend as well, I hope that is what you have found here.

    I'm not sure who it was that said, "If you truly love something, set it free", but it rings true here. If you love someone, don't try to change them; after all, the way they are now is what you fell in love with.

    I love you,
    Brazos

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