season's cheer

Santa has lost his soaring flight
reindeer won't be of season's good cheer
lazy and full of rich red wine
they refuse to fly and pull his sleigh

toys are strewn in the new fallen snow
glasses of wine scattered here and there
all would sing for another round
a bewildered Santa has lost his way

patiently he chides them to obey
gifts and surprises wait for another day

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A contest entry

Funny Picture Contest by penman. 1500 points, ended November 30, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
THE CHRISTMAS SPIRIT by WesBreezyxxx. 400 points, ended December 31, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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WesBreezyxxx
December 31, 2008
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wonderful

penman
November 30, 2008
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

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