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Rebirth

A dream was dreamt, the future foretold,
as life unravelled, fates controlled,
An Angel summoned, to the divine consciousness,
unjust we watch, pleading minds competence.

As time unwinds, with a gift replaced,
a son, yet the reflection of his mother's face.
Innocence nurtured from family branches,
a broken heart, with memories embraced.

Understanding gained, as thoughts are clarified,
Once answers sot, now feelings mystified.
A gift I was given, only now I comprehend
To say my goodbye, as she transcends.

For I was the dreamer, the brother,
the fortune teller.

Forever in my thoughts, I miss you.


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To my Sister Angela...

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  • Lady Altheia
    December 3, 2008

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    Awww so sad, I think. The child lives but the mother passes on. Yet, she wiklling gives her life for her child.


  • FaerieNWonderland
    December 3, 2008

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    how beautiful.
    this is so well written.
    i love the emotion pouring from every word!

    i enjoyed reading this, thanks so much for sharing.
    your Faerie

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    November 25, 2008
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    Thank you for your most beautifully expressed entry, Josie