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she makes me weep


With insightful eyes
Strong spoken lips
Heartfelt words
And tender kiss

With truthful smile
Honest mind
Powerful personality
That won’t be denied

She’s the world I live in
The air that I breathe
The sky that I soar
My duty my leave

She is my honour
My pride
My glimmer of hope
And my future bride

The mother
And heart on my sleeve
Every thing to me
She makes me weep

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i love her,and this is the smallest tribute yo her...

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  • Little Charmy
    October 7
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    beautiful

    it almost brought tears to my eyes; it was so well spoken <3
    i love your work


  • SheWalksWithDeath
    December 4, 2008
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    lovely

    this was truely heartfealt, i love it. Your very good.


  • SuZyCuE
    December 3, 2008

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    Beautiful

    What a beautiful poem. Whoever she is she I hope she knows how lucky she is to have some one love her like you do... Great job & Thank you for entering


  • XxApatheticAngelxX
    November 24, 2008
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    pretty

    this is amazing....

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