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My Goddess

Your beauty is as mesmerizing as gold
Sparking an intense passion in my soul

I hunger after the sweetness of your heart
To satisfy my desires not in part

Passions soar higher in ecstacy
Trembling in a world of fantasy

To feel the pleasure without sadness
Opening to a world of gladness

Feeling your pleasure next to mine
Our spirits unite and then entwine

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  • Rhythm Child
    November 24, 2008

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    A great entry
    thanks for taking part, wishing you luck would be an insult to your talent so take care

    message me for anything
    Billy (Rhythm Child)