The full moon alight, glowing bright,
illuminating all within my sight!
Enhancing the surrounding silence,
overwhelming, I sense the Lords presence!
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Lost within the wonder of His grace
no sense of time, no sense of space!
Words leave my soul up to His ear
sharing with Him all that I fear.
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With loving kindness He restores,
as all my faults he listens and endures.
My heart is lifted and my soul sings
as his words within my whole being rings
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‘My dearest child you, I forgive,
I gave my life that you may live!
Go in peace and sin no more,
Eternal life is yours for evermore!’
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Even as the full moon slowly wanes,
and darkened are the narrow lanes
still the silver linings glowing there
where the moon before did brightly stare.
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Within my heart restored and whole,
I give the Lord my all, my soul!!
And every step that I now take
I know He walks within my wake!!!
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Please tell me what you think
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still the silver linings glowing there
where the moon before did brightly stare.
ahhh nice concept, the part is fact that you are awake in the wake for past and future are they, a gift of focussed vision, auditory and body artwork, and never forget good ol' yodas words mmm! do or do not, there is no try....
anyforce thanks girl,
w a real lightsaber
-jas
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wonderful.
(:
I love how you express forgiveness and guidance.
Great write.
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Excellent
I wouldn't use the exclamation points because it indicates shouting to me and your words are strong enough.
Hope that helps.
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THis is soo beautiful written from the heart and inspired words of truth are displayed here! Its nice to come across such a nice piece as this wow It really touched me!
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Not bad at all, a fine cadence here! (suggestions: line 4 "Lords" should be "Lord's".... line 7 "leaves" should, I think, be "leads".... pretty fair poem here...keep it up!!!
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Redemption
You have captured the sense of His presence and love.
This is a very well written piece Marianna! I loved reading it and it captured my heart and mind! Wonderful job writing this one!!!!!!
Bravo!!!
As always, In Christ,
Annette
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This is a very nice write. Not really a prayer, but well written. I think one line has a typo, "‘My dearest child you are forgive,". Still, thank you for entering, I will reread at judging.
Sam
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