When fleet concentration meets captivation
I’m released with the fine art of syncing -
This new dimension becomes an extension
So I soar with the flight of new thinking.
This art of reflection seeks out a connection
As the mind, mediates all the linking,
This new fascination breeds fine germination
While it pushes aside wishful thinking.
A new comprehension alerts my attention
A few facts may be viewed as hoodwinking,
While the last of the senses then form a consensus
To enjoy, all I feel without blinking.
From morning ‘til night my soul feels delight
And my heart, like a lighthouse, keeps winking -
In those silent spaces, there’s angelic-like faces
And it’s those that preclude thoughts of sinking.
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Author notes
there's power in the positive!
A contest entry
- "Why not tell us what you are thinking" - Winklings #146 by Lyndon.
1750 points, ended November 24, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nothing like a positive charge to start the day. I'll be back to read more in good time as I see you have a lot to say on a lot of things.
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The pace is delightful,
the race of your thoughts,
the surge from introspection
to your joy of revelation!
Cleverly invigorating,
positively exciting!!
Love it!
M-C
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Huh? lol Let me read that again!
Ok, that definitely needed a more concerted effort!
It's Inspiration (in any one of many possible forms,) and you've given us the impetus and process involved.
"In those silent spaces, there’s angelic-like faces
And it’s those that preclude thoughts of sinking."
I could be off here, but I read that as, "the new faces that you created with your germination...your new ideas, inspiration.
Being less introspective than you, I just put on a fake mustache and look at myself in the mirror.
While you are observing, redefining and coming to a consensus...my thoughts are more basic..."Stomach growl...me hungry...me find food...stop stomach grumble."
You are a member of the Winklings? I didn't know that.
Thanks, it was, as Bad Bill said...clever...and as I said...introspective...and as Sir Ima just told me, creative...and he knows more than I do.
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Clever...and marvellously well-rhymed! Best of luck in the contest.
Bill
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Very good!
Interesting thoughts and ideas! Good luck in the contest!
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