What do I want?
well here's a start
I want your love to haunt
to travel deep within my heart
Put your arms around my waist
Kiss me tenderly, upon the lips
Let me feel your arms embrace
grasp me softly at the hips
When romance, we do embrace
I feel your warmth around me
It fills with passion about this place
open your eyes and you can see
What do I want?
This journey shall never embark
All they see is a flaunt
they cant possibly love from the heart.
All we are is just a taste
just like their potato chips
And our time, they shall waste
while they stare, and drool drips
Hmph, romance I shall not chase
because I'll probably never see
I'll just ready my can of mace
because pigs are all men will be.
Author notes
Sort of a little humor wrapped up in the views of a woman.
The last three stanzas are sort of a flip flop of the first three. The first three show desire and longing, while the last three show a true reality.
You will also notice the rhyme matches ...stanza 1 matches stanza 4, 2 matches 5, and 3 matches 6. Enjoy 
A contest entry
- Battle of the Sexes ~ Guys, your turn... by Xianaria.
700 points, ended December 23, 2008, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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Great work
Congrats on your win, see you in round 2!! I love the flip flop you did by the way!
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I'm a pig lol I feel like I should be in group therapy stand up and say "Yeah I'm a pig! Will always be one I have been pig like free for ten months now, (clapping from other pigs) until the other night my friend took me, sorry dragged me in to a titie bar (gasps) and I resorted to being a pig again lol and I have to tell you all I AM LOVING IT
funny stuff
Cyber Artist
who has the mind of a 46 year old child got it off e-bay
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I really like this it's a very sweet write and I really enjoy reading this it's very good full of love romances and desire :] very good and the potato chip part was funny =] but thats good if the poem has humor and you did have it
anyway exactly but keep writing
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OMG, I never knew you had it in you. lol...
I like the potato chip part.
Now, lemme clue you into a little more on what a woman wants....
Someone who will care for them as much as they do. Someone to grow old with, that they know when they are tired of being the "independent woman" they were raised to be, who will care for them as if they are the most precious thing in the universe. Someone who knows that regardless of their faults, we love them all the same.
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Aww how cute...seriously though its usually a bit hard thinking things like a woman would do, but I think you did pretty good with this, especially for the first bits. And loved the humor side to this. well done
QOD
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ooh. this is interesting, the fact that the different stanzas match. anyhoo... this made me laugh, in the end. tho i gotta say, your frist few stanzas were beautiful. great poem. keep writng
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i think you did a great job on this poem, and i got the humorous parts, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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i like this
the frist bit are true
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