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Her Heart

 
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She has the strength of Pegasus,
The  courage of a black stalion,
And the kind heart of a mare.
 
But comparing you to a horse,
Won't make it any clearer,
Just how much your loved.
 
For a better guid to life's road,
And a kinder heart to be proud of,
I could never have asked for.
 
...This is to you my mummie
 
 

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Promtp: 1e and 4, this poem I will dedicate to Sensual Angel
Picture Credit: http://peacockmask.deviantart.com/art/A-Maiden-s-Fantasy-38488316

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  • chilali
    December 10, 2008

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    Beautiful take on the picture!! I love it and a lovely dedication to my AP Mommy! Thank you for entering and good luck

    Much love
    Ylova


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 4, 2008

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    how did i miss this one, i can only say there are some talent women in my family,, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    this is so beautiful, I love it very much. this brought tears to my eyes and the words to express how much this means to me simply couldn't be enough. I love you very much, thank you so much for this.. this poem means a lot to me. You mean the world to me. this deserves Gold..

    good luck
    mommy
    ssss


    • Meroza
      November 27, 2008
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      I don't know about gold, but I am glad you liked the poem ^_^ You deserve this one, mummie!