A contest for my attention,
Never did I think it would happen
That someone would fall for me
The way I had for them.
You smiled with your eyes,
You pushed your way towards me
Right through the guys I was with.
And yes you caught my eye,
And you knew it, though I didn't show.
You sliced through the metal walls
Fencing off my innards.
I had no idea that two wrongs
Just might make a right,
That perhaps I could fix you
The way you mended me.
A year of brand new pages,
Each more intriguing than the last.
But I feared you were my bandaid-
That we were just two left-overs,
Making anything, but a right.
Yet still I hung on,
Faith, I suppose, you could call it
But faith, it's just a belief
And God knows, it's far from knowledge.
God sees, and obviously has no care.
She had no right, you were mine first
But I, I didn't know I deserved more.
I lost the game, a game of fools,
I guessed I never read the rules
Or made the proper move.
And for almost a year,
I stalked you both.
I watched what was mine
And the reason for my loss.
I'd called her crazy
Then realised my insanity.
I became ill at her thought,
A mention of her name.
God sees, and obviously had no care
For just a minion, like me
Who lost everything,
When she had you removed.
And I tried to be happy, I swear.
But without you, I was miserable at best.
But things change, as they say
And only today did I learn
That what comes around, goes around
And that bitch learnt what karma is.
Author notes
Prompt: "I want to be happy for you but it's making me miserable."
Reminded me of Mayday Parade - Miserable At Best
Innards= my heart
Two left-overs= A play with the "two wrongs don't make a right" || And also, L[eft]OVERS. Lovers. Kind of. Bit of a pun I suppose.
God sees= the meaning of her name. Hoe bag. Suck on *that*
The proper move= like in chess. Not like "making my move" on him or w/e.
Karma is= a bitch
A contest entry
- Quote Contest! by vampedvixen.
1200 points, ended December 8, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show me something. by morgana raven.
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i think this was an amazeing poem and i dont want on your bad side eaither , you do desve better then him and karma will reward
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LOL no humane human being could be as bad as her. Not many people get on my bad side, she is just a mole! SO SO SO Happy that karma got her back.
She deserved it, and it's the best revenge I could wish for.
Thank you very much for the comment, & the contest already finished. I didn't win
Oh well, better luck next time hey?
Love love.
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I'm so glad she finally learned what karma is.. I think more people should learn that. Thank you so much for entering my contest, I really liked this entry!
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LOL. your a vindictive bitch, have i ever told you that. I love you, but remind me to not get on your bad side.. Which fella we talking about now?
Any it's a good poem, crushing too.. very well done.. Keep it up my dear and good luck in the contest. placing for sure!
By the by - its an awesome background. And I love you.
XoXo Claire-Anne XoXo
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After googling "vindictive", I thank you for that brilliant comment, you speak the truth. lol.
And I wouldn't be as big of a bitch with you haha.
Thanks deary, hopefully I place. *wink wink* lol. I love the background, whipped it up the other day. Simple but ace.
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Lol. ... that fact that you had to google it is almost sad. but its ok, i still love you. and i looked at your page, that convo between you and gem, i could see it happening.. many times over.
btw- innards normally refers to the intestines.. (sp?) just so you know.. it's making very bad images inside my mind. lol. .loves -
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Lol I'm getting dumber as I get older.
And innards, referring to organs. In general, so yeah. Nerrr. lol jk
And yeah, me and Gem. I'm physically blonde, and she's mentally blonde. We're also dickheads.
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