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Fall

More subtle passions.
I will be forever overtaken by these.
Now I feel words accompanied by the inability of expression.
The inward intensity of first love is my foremost emotion.
Intensity is an emotion.
Insignificant urge compressed within me.
Focus directed towards a single reality.
And so I can breath
And thoughts present themselves more clearly.
I love our connection
Don't let it die, It's screaming love so loud.
Scream love so loud.
Scream for me the lyrics of a song
I swear I'll fall asleep to it
To your screaming lullaby.
Or sing softly
Because I love your voice
Whisper so loud my heart explodes
So loud that I fall asleep in your arms.

Author notes

I wrote this when I was 16.

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  • emo-chick81
    March 28
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    very good

    i like this poem a lot it shows no matter what love can overcome everything very,very good