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within me

crumble ruins
neglected
and forgotten
forever lost

beneath the

undergrowth 

 

A contest entry

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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    Wow, this is lovely!
    Very well written; I thoroughly enjoyed it; especially the last three lines

    Thank you very much for your entry!
    I wish you luck
    Claire x


  • shecantstopfalling.
    November 24, 2008
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    wow. That is awesome as. I really like it. Good luck


    • solitarytear
      November 24, 2008
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      thank you

      wasnt to sure with this one.......your comment helped easy that a bit