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Yearning

Peace and tranquility,
for which she yearns.
Flowing breezes through,
rustling the pages of time.

Peace and tranquility,
calms the mind.
Bringing forth sensuality,
with peaceful feeling.

Peace and tranquility,
create bliss inside.
unheard of when,
stress is added.

A contest entry

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  • Sandygram
    December 1, 2008

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    I love the softness your words lend to this picture prompt. You words are full of lovely imagery stirring the reader's senses. Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck. Your poem was a pleasure to read this morning. Take care, Sandy


  • Antipodi
    November 25, 2008
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    The heart does truely yearn this wonderful goal an excellent write


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 25, 2008
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    nice

    and can't beat the message, who wouldn't want..'peace and tranquility?


  • georgie
    November 24, 2008

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    great stuff sweetheart, so i have a husband who is not only gorgeous but talented too
    hugs,
    ur wife, forever and a day,
    georgie,
    xxx


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    November 24, 2008

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    Nice job with this one. I liked the short lines that packed a good message in. Best of luck in the contest.

    Mike

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