Breathless glory awaiting,
slumber tranquility revolving,
sense of mystery fascinates.
Author notes
10 words only
A contest entry
- 10 word challenge by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 24, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
hope
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So very captivating! I love it. I love the picture!! Well done
I love your short writes
Much love
Ylova
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sweet!
a beautiful Christmas card indeed!
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So pretty
How lovely as a christmas card this is and please I must tell you happy thanksgiving and should we be off during the hollidays Merry Christmas as well honey
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Very nicely done! Has such a peaceful feel in each line. You've said a lot in so few words, beautifully penned hun
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elegant poem in elegant back ground
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Brilliant
in 10 perfect words
I wish you all the best in the contest hun
Julie x
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a very good write especially the lines...sense of mystery fascinates. Good luck in the contest!
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Very captivating indeed. A brilliant write
Love, Alyzeh
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truly inventive and captivating... x
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