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Wasted Growth

A broken seed may sprout too soon
Where walls give up on growing
A seelding favoured by the moon
Whose strength stopped wind from blowing

Yet, without warning, nature's best
Was labelled 'waste of time'
This view of ignorance expressed
The folly of mankind

So for revenge, that wind returned
No strength left to deflect
And all the power I had eared
Had nothing to protect

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  • siddy jones
    December 2, 2008

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    wow, this is a really great poem. i like the rhyme structure of it and i like the message. you are a talented writer. thank you for your comments on my poetry and my page, you seem very nice.


  • alyssaxo
    November 25, 2008
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    Great =)