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It’s just the look in your eyes
that took me by surprise
And now I’m just standing here
Ready to face my fear.

Never can I wait to see the day
When the my dreams fade away
And you’ll be close to me
Letting me continue to breathe

I can’t wait to feel this faith
In the place where I’ll be safe
And there we’ll be together
In our lives that last forever.

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