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Spirits

I've lost myself
In the fading lights of self doubt
Divine pleasures of the soul
Now foreign to me

Plagued by the memories of your kiss
Your touch, your hands
The simple comfort
Of your eyes

Uncertainty running through my veins
Trailing sluggishly after the Vodka
Making way for the salty fluids
Of unshed tears

For tears must all go somewhere
And so they flood into my heart
Mixing with alcohol
Burning with anger

Spirits whisper in my ears
About last chances
And ruined once upon a times
About failure and fear

And my hands shake
As I choke on words
Better left unsaid
But begging to be heard

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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    November 24, 2008
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    The simple comfort
    Of your eyes

    is such a good phrase


    nice

    al