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Farther Away

Here I'm looking at you...
Looking at your face..
Looking at your eyes...
Staring at you,from head to toe...

There you are from a distance...
Looking at my face..
Looking at my eyes...
Staring at me...

I try to get closer to you...
As you do the same to me...
Trying to get closer to me...
You sing your lullaby...
I get more closer to you...

You reach out your hand...
To reach mine hand...
Trying to reach out my hand to yours...
Singing sweet words...

There you are again...
Trying to hug me...
Trying to kiss me...
So I try to do the same...
To hug you...
To kiss you...

Trying to reach to hold you my love...
But my eyes stares at you...
You starts to fade away...
I call out your name...
As I try to get close to you...
To hug you...
Kiss you...
Touch you...
All that is left of you that I see...
Is smoke from where you stood.
And my eyes crying out to you..

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  • Snowing Kisses silver member
    February 3

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    gosh this is lovely, you painted a little masterpiece on y heart, a truly lovely write
    thankyou so much for sharing


  • XxYoru-OkamixX
    December 27, 2008
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    oh wow. this is an emotional piece and a very enjoyable read. great job ^^