I lay in the greener grass
while heart shaped clouds
drift by in the baby blue sky
fluffy and marshmallow white
the sun so friendly keeps its distance
while its rays comfort me
and the wind invites the flowers to dance
today is vibrant...
so many days wasted
and left unappreciated
when all you know is dull
and melancholia is your only companion
such a stunning hue can sting
until you feel as rich as color itself
only then will you ever say
today is vibrant, and i love it ♥
Author notes
yeah, im bout to burst into little pieces of happy
...so, watch the fuck out lol
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A contest entry
- Pre Writes Contest By Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
1750 points, ended July 13, 136 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
yeah, idk
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so very vibrant indeed. love the image of laying in the greener grass - very nice.
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I felt the imagery was amazing
A pretty piece so light and vibrant as was the happy thoughts
you have portrayed here
Thank you and best wishes
Julie -
Amazing. The imagery is just, wow. I have no words for this other than I loved it. It makes me feel hopeful, that today could be vibrant. Beautifully done Rena. Beautifully done.
Josh : -
Hope you were feeling just as radiant and truely exuberant as your muses creativity while writting this
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VIBRANT!
This Poem is Vibrant and beautiful! I really like it and I really like your style! This piece really made me smile.
And I really wasn't trying to rhyme there. It just happened. I swear! lol
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What a wonderful write...now bring back the real Rena!
lol
Well penned, and such depth of emotion. I'm glad you found someone who makes you feel this way, and may you and he be happy for a long, long time to come.
'D'
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until you feel as rich as color itself!!! A beautiful line!!! Who doesn't wanna feel like that. I think this is the first poem I've read from you full of joy!
hooray for that 
Peace and Love always
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omg the happiness its burning my eyes, I think i'm going blind lol.
You know ive forgotten what the fuck happy meant until i read this poem shit. Anyway nice poem you got here Rena.
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wow...this is so not like you...where is the scareiness...where are the insults...where the hell is a single curse word!!!
I am so happy that you've found someone to make you feel happy...keep him close and don't let him slip away.
love always,
-Dustin-
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you're fucking cute rena
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you better dream up some rmantic clouds, and imagine the eyes of loved ones adoring you,. i for one, can be add to that devoted group who take you to our hearts. lovely, but sad piece.
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