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Followed by Despair

 

 

 

 

 

Running
Screaming
Bruising
Bleeding
In disguise, she's running, screaming dread.
In pure white snow, bruising, bleeding red.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Author notes

This form is called Tyburn.

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  • Lady Michaella
    November 25, 2008

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    omfg... this is excelent! wow, a deep dark bloody write!
    brilliant take on the prompt, i must say.
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  • bigperm
    November 25, 2008

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    well formed...

    you have given a new dimension of life to your image. bravo and best of luck in your competition.