falling apart
she feels the weight crushing down
falling apart
unable to stop the pain
breaking down
she see's her world in ashes
breaking down
the remnant's of her former self is gone
reaching out
but not quite ready to let go
reaching out
to those she loves but cant seem to tell all
trying to help
he holds her broken fram
trying to help
he holds back his own desires and truths
unable to open her eyes
she is blinded by her pain
unable to open her eyes
she cannot see him straining to help her
The first glace of reality
she see's what she has been missing
The first glance of reality
and how his love has been never faltering even if she hasn't loved him
Sharing in his want
In learning to love,she tastes the sweet sugar of a release
Sharing in his want
to answer correctly to, "will you fly with me?"
A contest entry
- Not sure a title! But come anyway! by Lost in a Dreamstar.
448 points, ended November 25, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
-
You forgot th option but I loved it great!

