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Reconciliation

We’ve abused her from greed, to satisfy our devouring need.
We’ve gone from friend to aberration. It’s time for reconciliation.


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Prompt: Two lines that speak truth to you
Picture Credit: http://niifantasy.deviantart.com/art/Justify-This-99430266
Two lines

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  • Cant force beloved
    November 23, 2008

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    I like this and I'm happy to see you've won the silver.


    • KayJay
      November 24, 2008
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      My what big teeth you have Thank you for the read and comments...
      Ken


      • Cant force beloved
        November 24, 2008
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        You're welcome KayJay.

        Thank you for complimenting me pearly whites, I floss them daily.


  • Michael H.
    November 23, 2008
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    Nice ryhming. I like this. Good job.


    • KayJay
      November 23, 2008
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      Thanks for the read... two lines to distill a lifetime of truth but one trys
      Ken

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