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Butterscotch Plums

Visions of merriment
flicker about.
These tools of light
ease my pain.

My butterscotch plums
they cling to me
teasing my
intellectual palate.

Her frostbitten words
chill my heart
halting it's beat
her deception
intensifies my pain.

My butterscotch plums
they cling to me
teasing my
intellectual palate.

My plums will
always replenish
themselves
even if someone
gobbles them up.

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  • penman gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well done. A great take on the prompt. best of luck in the contest.