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The Things You Are

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From Song of the Firebird

O my love- my love- my angel muse

Hear my violin sounding softly

It's a holy melody- calm and pure

Symbolic of my love for you...

You are the music,

The extraordinary Light,

The poet of heaven's script,

The firebird, the rose,

And the guardian

Of the child...

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  • Love of a Bullet
    November 26, 2008
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    :-)

  • Love of a Bullet
    November 26, 2008

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    Tsk... such a hard subject to write on; humans are such slippery matter. Yet, it occurs to me that the real purpose here may go to showing us your heart, rather than the one described. Love has no meaning outside of the ability to experience it - this is how we define from within.

    So then. If we assume that we may see a better picture of your heart than any others, we must also suppose that the power of the poet lies in your ability to describe yourself. I can find no failing in the premise.

    ~ Das


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    November 24, 2008
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    Exellent work Judy
    Well done


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    Love brings in intense light when it is pure,
    it simply is
    lovely soulful pleasure to read Poetess
    God bless you...
    's


  • rite
    November 23, 2008

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    Light reflecting from words. Music and fragrances dancing through minds. The power of thought materialized, allowing those of this world to peek in others. Where the clamor of war is obsolete and peace rings everywhere, always. Thank you precious Muse for creating and sharing. These were magnificent words to wake up by.

  • Bob Fox silver member
    November 23, 2008

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    Judy

    It seems a certain spiritual light caresses your words with tenderness. I believe that you are in touch with a higher being at times.


  • thepoetssoul
    November 23, 2008

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    This is a lovely penning filled with spiritual light and love.Tis a wonderful penning indeed.

    Tony

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