leaves scattered
echoing
"I'm what
you'll want,
but never know."
Author notes
10words
pure me.
A contest entry
- Describe yourself once more in 10 words { The best of 4 rounds } by Noir mariposa...x.
1200 points, ended November 26, 2008, 41 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Magnificent piece
Wonderfully worded with a lovely pic of you to end it with.
And congrats on the trophy, it deserved it
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Wow! You are just full of brilliance, aren't you? Such talent. I love this write and the picture! Prettiness! <3 Congratulations on the Silver love. You deserve it!
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LOL!
Sorry, I can not help laughing at this. That ending sounds like something a stalker would say
..."you love me, you just don't know it yet!" *creeper smile*
lol, I know what you meant by the ending, my bizarre brain just thinks of it in a different context!
*cough* On a serious note, GOOD JOB
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haha, nooooo!!!!
i didnt mean it like that..haha
i meant like..someone who you shared something with, and they gave up, and left you there like someone stuck in black in white farewells...knowing if they only knew...they would never leave...
haha, not like ill make you love me
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no worries, i know you didn't mean it like that
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haha, yeah you know its just the personael thing, makes you a little defensive, haha....idk
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don't worry, i don't think you are a creepy stalker!
at least... I hope not -
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haha, i coudlnt stalk someone...not that i know of, haha, i hope i cant...like..yeah weird
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jeez dis is sad
ya sure do pull um out de bag
gd luck 2 ya babes
cheers abe
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aw wow hun fantastic lovely imagery steph good luck inthe contest
maralisa
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Awww stephy you're so pretty!!
I love that shot of you
And I love the wording... brilliant sweetie!!
Thank you for entering
Claire x -
Brief and poten, lovely metaphor, you are blown by the wind? Beautiful writing.
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Wow Stephanie. This is amazing.
You are brilliant young lady. *Salutes you*
I love the picture, so pretty.
Muah
Love, Alyzeh
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lol. thanks, and no im not
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Wow~
Powerful Voice Beautiful~
Brevity that reached the highest mountain~
and touched the Heavens- what more could one say to that~ Bravo!!
Swells the eyes...
Keep that quill dancing~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Thats all that needs to be said Steph
hahahaha
Very well done on describing yourself with so few words
All the best to you in the contest
Ken
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Brilliant!
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Hey!!!!! Good for you for not settling for something you are much better without! Good luck!
~Kystal Angel
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kind of hard to touch on this, but it is good to see a little bit of a window inside you, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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such sweet words..sound like you...full of energy...
and good luck!
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Dynamic words. Good luck in the contest and happy trails.
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LOL I lke the image of you.
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oooo...this is very creative and unique...GREAT WRITE!
Good luck
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Excellent write. I love the description.
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