morning breaks like waves upon the shore
unfurling moments; crayon markings on a wall
sunlight glimmers; whorls of colours
as misty thoughts dance, then fly with
butterfly kisses and dragonfly tomorrows
all laid out in leafy garments
as graceful swans glide across polished mirrors
reflecting ancient skies
this daybreak...
A contest entry
- morning songs by Nicolette.
1400 points, ended December 6, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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reading this piece made me feel like i was given a free pass into the special section of Disneyland. lol
if only life were truly like this
thank you for this exuberant entry
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Lovely imagery here in this poem. I really liked "dragonfly tomorrows". I always used to tell my children that dragonflies are actually today's fairies, lol - so see where you took my mind
My only critic would be that perhaps you were a bit too heavy on the adjectives but other than that, this poem falls wit a soft ease on the senses. Thank you for sharing it with us in the contest.
~ Nicolette
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