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Glass/Fusion Aries

  I peered into a looking glass
  in search of my true being
  Reflected were but vain eyes/orbs
  my seat of life lies unseen
  I gazed upon a neighbours face
  to realize what they thought
  Just image of another self
  eyes bland, mirroring naught
  I sought out a great scholar
  and begged for him to be kind
  Look in that reflection glass
  be wary,see what you may find
  The looking glass shattered
  scintillating slivers lay
  Perilous graven image look
  life blood crimson ebbes away
  The neighbours face contorted
  bais etched in every line
  Horror shock revulsion
  again we are thwart with time
The scholar voiced entoty
with such eloquence and pride
Helpless hopeless harmless being
lay bleeding no cared they cried

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    Such a truly sad take on the prompt, where poeple can look on, judge and do nothing. Thank you for your entry even though it's way over the words limit.
    Gaylene