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I Love

I love
the way you breathe
the way you gasp
the way you laugh.

I love
the funny expressions you make
the amazing way you can look like your on extacy when your not
the way you make me feel.

I love
how you talk to me
when you tell me you love me
when you say you'll never leave.

I hope
you'll never leave me
you'll never hate me
that I can stay with you
forever
and
always.

Author notes

Just something I thought of after spening the day with the guy I've fallen deeply for. I gotta sey some of the stuff if his reaction to things lol. and just incase he reads this. i told you i could make a list of all the things and more... to bad he left me

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  • silvermisery
    November 24, 2008
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    amazing....you make me almost understand what it might feel like to love somebody that much...

    and haha "the funny expressions you make" yeah that's so him...he does make weird faces, they're hilarious. I kinda like the one where he squinches up his eyes and shakes his head and starts laughing.


    • Hated.
      November 24, 2008
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      i think i embarassed him with it lol. good thing he doesnt no its on the internet

      • silvermisery
        November 25, 2008
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        haha yeah i guess we can scare guys sometimes if we get serious since we tend to be more emotionally mature than they are

        hahaha.....that just made me laugh out loud and now my parents are looking at me weird O.o


  • TheDeadMan
    November 24, 2008
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    awesome poem. great emotion and word.s.


  • Night Dweller
    November 23, 2008
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    awesome poem i somewat know how u feel keep writing


    • Hated.
      November 24, 2008
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      lol thanks i think hes a lil embarassed about the poem tho lol

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