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Till We Meet Again By A 21 to 25 Chance

Till we meet again,
21 you left,
22 you came,
we met at 23,
we went back to 21,
and started all over again,
you went to 24 and left,
I went to 35 and ended,
I will wonder which way to take,
because 21, 23, and 25 were right and 22, 24 were wrong,
never knowing what to be or what to do,
never knowing you again,
i'll just stop at 24 next time around.                         

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  • Dont Lose THE ONE
    November 23, 2008

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    Hahaha... I liked that.... It was a clever poem! And I enjoyed it! Hahaha... So the numbers.... Lol. They're ages. Right... Don't think I'm dumb... Hahaha. And I liked it!


    • Tadd
      November 23, 2008
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      i bet your beautiful and your personality.


      • Dont Lose THE ONE
        November 23, 2008
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        Thanxz! I would like to think so... You sound pretty cute and awesome too... And your poetry is fantastic!