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Broken

 

 

        Grieving soul

 

               searching endlessly

 

           hoping to find

 

                   tranquility and love  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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10 Words Describing Me

A contest entry

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  • crimsondew
    November 24, 2008
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    A sad line here...Hope it ends in a smile!


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    November 24, 2008
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    Otay, two things:

    1. Love love love the way you've described yourself. This is very powerful for just ten words, not to mention rather sad. I do hope you find it

    2. I love this background, did you make it?

    Lovely, thank you for your entry,
    I wish you luck.
    Claire x


  • shecantstopfalling.
    November 24, 2008
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    awesome I like it. Good luck


  • lostmedia
    November 23, 2008
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    hmm

    I liked this alot.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 23, 2008

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    i kind of wish i knew what to say to this insight into yourself, my friend, but i think all poems are insight to the poet, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • everyone1 gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    May it be for you friend ...

    May they come scurrying their way to you ...

    May it be ...

    Love you bud ...

    Please know this?

    ~ James ~




  • luna-midnight gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    awwwww
    i know what you mean, and good luck finding it. nicely done and good luck


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    aww...lovely write...

    Good luck

    ps love your background


  • Scyphon
    November 23, 2008
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    Beautifully done my friend, as always

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