you loop a finger around the length of me
bringing us closer, then let go
I scatter on the cold stone floor
like a thousand glass beads
Author notes
prompt: glass
In a list
A contest entry
- Another Prompt by AliceinPoetryLand.
700 points, ended November 23, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Glass beads... LOVE that image.
Succinct. Brilliant. Definitely gold-worthy.
Why do you have to be so good?
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Wow. What a superb take on the prompt. I love this!! Congrats on the Gold. I totally second Kim's comment. YOU NEED to PUBLISH!
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How stunning! A brillant and creative take on the prompt...
you need to publish, queen of the Golds...
Love it,
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powerful...I love the image you leave the reader with. Excellent penning!
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this is amazing.
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Well done! I can relate to this too well.
This was a very well deserved Gold!
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Oh this is brilliant! Love it! Thanks so much for your entry
Gaylene
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I love the way you have written this. Excellent!
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oooooo!!
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