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Hopeful Expectations

A ceiling windex clean
through which,
one sees unreachable heights...
yet still we try.

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  • rbruce gold member
    November 28, 2008
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    Great take on the prompt and nicely done. we do still try, don't we?


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    A most profound take on the prompt. Much truth penned here. Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene