She’s fought for millennia,
tracking both the wicked and the wild
Born to an assassins life,
she’s trained since a small child
Receiving her sword at age thirteen,
down the killing road she trod
Carving a name since bounty one,
tracking down the great Geladd
A myth to most, a giant was he,
and strode the worlds as king
Hunted down in twenty days,
her deadly justice she did bring
Stalking them both night and day,
never does she sleep
It doesn’t matter who you are,
the whirlwind they shall reap
A huntress for the ages,
there is no pity in her heart
For now; you are the victim,
if you have played a part
No distance is too great for her,
following men for countless years
The ending always is the same ,
a wife who’s brought to tears
A legend; now they tremble,
as their papers bear her stamp
A tall and slender piece of work
a sexy killing vamp
With the speed of Zinzar lightning,
and tight muscles of her frame
A ruthless hunter of the night,
Caltasa is her name
Ageless she does roam the dark,
collecting debts they owe
To meet with her will be your last,
you’ll wind up far below
The last in line is Amos Doors,
he killed four dozen men
She slaughtered him and brothers three,
with pure adrenalin
When she comes to greet the day,
the sun rise bows to her
For death resides deep in her sword,
and carnage she incurs
Author notes
picture prompt: Night_elf_hunter_by_xadhoom at ceviantart.com "Break my heart"
A contest entry
- Fantasy Writers....un-sheath your pens of fire! by FlamesDragoness.
1500 points, ended December 23, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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Once again my sweet Pirate King, this is worthy of more than the single trophy you have received. I believe you have a winner here and something that will rock the world with more than just a single vision.
With all my love, honey.
Joann
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Cool picture. I loved the rhyming. That was well done and made it sound like a tale told by a very dark minstrel. I also liked the idea of a female bounty hunter/assassin of sorts. Just a side note, I thought purple was an excellent choice of font colour...just a great colour for dark ass kicking creatures haha. Overall a great poem. Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest
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this was very good. thanks so much for sharing this piece.
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She is wicked vengence incarnate the molifier that tempers mankind
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wow. what a fantasy write. i enjoyed reading your great poem along with the awesome picture. thanks for sharing and congrats on your gold.
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A myth to most, a giant was he,
and strode the worlds as king
Hunted down in twenty days,
her deadly justice she did bring
nice rhyme,
usually I don't like rhyme but you did it pretty well
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I love the poem, but I'm not wild about the image. But, either way, this was very deserving of it's gold! Congratulations, and thank you for sharing!
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What a pleasure it was to read this well written poem,
each line pulled us in..and we couldn't wait to read the
next!
well done!
well done!
feast of a great poem!
flamesdragoness
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thumbs up
what a deftly told tale
masterful
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5 F***ing stars! Incredible poem. Illustrative and on of my favs, dark! Dripping with venom is she! haha! This poem just rocked my foundation, and slit a smile on my face from ear to ear...ahhh my day is fulfilled.
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Wow this is a really dark piece. Yes I agree about the novel
Wonderful flow and rhyme. Really loved reading this.
All the best in the contest
gaylene
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That is one interesting character. Her story would make a great fantasy novel. Nice write
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