Like lightening bolts reaching,
scratching the surface~
Etching a tattoo
permanently in place
Where feelings,
and all hopes and dreams reside~
Leaving it fractured
when reality did collide
Author notes
Prompt/Inspiration - glass
30 creative words or less
A contest entry
- Another Prompt by AliceinPoetryLand.
700 points, ended November 23, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I can see who visits, so be courteous and comment, BUT not rudely critical.
Comments
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Wow~
Oy! What Power You have penned in 30 words or less~
The images pull at the Heartstrings
You take the reader there to *feel* this~
Congratulations on Your trophy win!
Wooooooo Hoooooooo!!
(throws some serious confetti)
Keep that quill dancing Beautiful!!
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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So sad. Your imagery is just superb' Thanks so much for your entry
Gaylene
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Sometimes it does seem the heart is made of glass, as it is so easily broken.
Well Done....Best of luck in the contest
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very sad, but so understood. best to you in the contest. blessings always~ Trisha~
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