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Born to Run

Sired by the chilly winds
a gypsy born to run.

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  • rbruce gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    I think I get this one. After 40 years travelling you could almost be a gypsy. Very well done again. I must have a go at some of these short poem contests.


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    Awww I like this one
    "Sired by the chilly winds
    a gypsy born to run."
    I keep repeating it in my head for some reason, it just flows really well ^^

    Thank you for your entry and
    I wish you the best of luck
    Claire x


  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    November 24, 2008

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    Ohh...I like this one too! This is going to be a difficult contest for the judge to decide. Nicely done & good luck in the contest!


  • luna-midnight gold member
    November 23, 2008
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    awww, run =)

    lol. lovely entry and good luck


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    wow...great write!

    Good luck


  • everyone1 gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    Sweet!

    Gypsy-run-run-run ....

    What a great day this is ...

    Happy to meet you!

    ~ James ~

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