I am stuck in a constant state of critical damage.
Author notes
Yeah... hope this is what you're looking for.
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A contest entry
- Describe yourself once more in 10 words { The best of 4 rounds } by Noir mariposa...x.
1200 points, ended November 26, 2008, 41 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
kind but constructive criticism please.
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This is exactly what I'm looking for ^^
This is a wonderful job... if not a little sad
Well done;
thank you for entering and I wish you the best of luck ^^
Claire x -
The ability to say volumes with brevty, is a great skill. You go it!
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I like this take on the prompt.
Good luck in the contest! -
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Thank you!!
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aw, i know this..it suxxs, but i love this, powerful and strong statement
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Great write...I really like this
Good luck
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Me! Too!
So very glad to meet you ... I can only get better form here ...!
Honest write ... thank you ...
~ James ~
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