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frosty

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frosty...
my breath
lingers
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  • Peteskid gold member
    July 11
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    a telling sign, and a sign we see and notice each time...PK

  • Bruce silver member
    January 15
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    Yes, I like this one, too. What a wonderful word choice - lingers . . . .


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    November 24, 2008

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    Wonderful haiku very fitting for this season! Its amazing how you can say so much in just 3 lines. I am smiling looking at the word 'my' Wonderful use of kigo and a brilliant aha moment can also be found here. I love L3. It adds a charisma to this piece that is just so amazing. It makes your haiku open-ended. Lovely work, as always!

    Char


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    beautiful piece


  • Swan song gold member
    November 23, 2008
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    LOL it is that time of year and you make the simple amazing with stunning peices such as this

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